Unit 5 Journal
I learned that even though people thought that my topic was a great topic to talk about and my thesis ideas was good, there was a lot I still needed to work on. The feedback I received concerns my wordiness of my writing and making sure I make a thesis that flows smoothly. This feedback I received can help me strengthen my topic and thesis, because I will know what words to use and put my ideas in the right order so that they flow smoothly when the readers reads my paper. Before I move on with the writing process I think I need to work on word selection as I tend to use same word back to back.